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ru's avatar

ur stories always have me hooked, wowowowow.

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Ru, i thank you; I’m glad my stories hook you, you have good taste

Jerry's avatar

Love it Will

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Thank you Jerry

Gogol's Goggles's avatar

Wtf this is genius

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Yay 😸😇

Alex De Lagarde's avatar

Riveting ! Dizzying ! TWO THUMBS UP

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YAY!!! Thank you 😸😸

Basil ࿔*:・༄˖°.'s avatar

this one was good

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Thank you Basil

Hambeans's avatar

you madman

mila's avatar

diva

Zerenner's avatar

Fuck this was bizarre and disturbing.

Really enjoyed the mix of Hunter S Thompson and Pynchon with the unreliable narration, drug use, and paranoia.

Great humor, nice asides that made the world feel real.

You straddle several genres successfully, and while the post looked long initially, it flew by once I started!

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Thank you so much ❤️, I’ve been working on developing this highly energetic voice that combines Pynchon and HST, which I am finding to be fairly useful in stories about contemporary power.

I wrote this story a few months ago and am really proud of it but was concerned about posting it on substack cause of the length, but decided to just post it anyway. Glad you read it and found it to go by quickly

simo's avatar

most normal day in Dubai

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and also the most normal day on a cruise ship