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I Like Things's avatar

I like this piece

Will Diana's avatar

Yay; I like that you like this piece

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I like that you like that I like this piece

Samara's avatar

tremendous work here

Will Diana's avatar

Thank you Samara! Means a lot from you

priya's avatar

immersive ; so good

Will Diana's avatar

Yayyy!!! thank you Priya!!!!

Saint-Lazare's avatar

The mystery of the sleepwalked corridors, the creeping sense of dread are both rendered with subtle poetry. Mesmerising.

Will Diana's avatar

Thank you, Saint-Lazare. I am very glad my short story was mesmerising,

Shak's avatar

Keep speaking gold, Diana

Will Diana's avatar

Thank you Shak 😸😸☮️❤️

Mike smith's avatar

Outstanding!

Will Diana's avatar

Thanks Mike!

Lightning Strikes Twice's avatar

Sleepwalking as literal astral travel; cheers!

Will Diana's avatar

exactly!! sleepwalking has this very odd, almost enchanted quality

James Überwindung's avatar

really enjoyed this, very Jungian. You are tapping into something wonderful with the lakeshore and lake metaphor

Will Diana's avatar

Thanks Tyler! I had a pretty big Jung phase over the summer, I’ve found his stuff to be very helpful for me thinking about my dreams